Untitled Dramatic Project
Synopsis
Two film students, NATHAN
CANTWELL and RICHARD BENNETT are planning to shoot a digital feature. Nathan is
the writer/director, Richard will be cameraman. Nathan's script is an ambitious
mix of pre-scripted scenes and improvisation. The inspiration is Alfred
Hitchcock's ROPE. As they test their equipment prior to the first night's
shooting, Richard is surprised when another student, GERRIT, arrives to operate
a second camera, mostly to create an electronic press kit or "EPK."
Another surprise is that Professor Hentzau, the faculty advisor, has been
invited to observe the shooting. Richard argues that this may compromise
Nathan's plan for the shoot. Nathan replies that Hentzau's presence is an
essential element.
When the camera comes back
on, a car is arriving. It contains EDDIE, a fellow student, and his new
girlfriend of six months, BOBBIE ANNE. She has aspirations as an actress and
has readily volunteered to co-star in the student film being made by Nathan.
After introductions and some chit-chat, two other young women, JEANIE and
SHARON--both theater students studying acting--arrive. As Nathan's film is a
"mirror" of ROPE, Jeanie and Sharon are to portray the equivalents of
"Brandon Shaw" and "Philip Morgan." While Bobbie Anne goes
into another room to change into her costume, put on make-up, and then shoot
some tests with Richard, Gerrit gets behind-the-scenes footage of Nathan with
the other women. There is no complete script for the movie; but Sharon and
Jeanie, who confirm to Nathan that they have both watched ROPE several times,
will improvise around the plot: two college students commit a thrill killing to
demonstrate that they can get away with it and that, as per their interpretation
of Nietszchean philosophy, their intellectually superiority frees them from the
constraints of the ordinary law and morality. As the women get into character,
Nathan receives a thick envelope from Eddie then gives him two twenties. Eddie
leaves.
The performances begin.
From the first Bobbie Anne is a bit confused but tries to play along
uncertainly, as Sharon and Jeanie are both verbally and physically menacing.
Throughout, Nathan can be heard at times shouting instructions. The performance
is interrupted by the arrival of Nathan's faculty advisor, PROFESSOR HENTZAU, a
45ish academic who has failed repeatedly at selling a script to Hollywood.
Hentzau is disdainful of the entire process. Although he has some grudging
respect for Nathan, he belittles Gerrit in particular. When he explains the
context of ROPE to Hentzau before the performance restarts, even Nathan is
mocked by the cynical professor.
Hentzau sits in the
background, as Sharon and Jeanie start in again on Bobbie Anne. Suddenly they
wrestle her to the ground and tie her up. Her screams of protest seem very
real, as do Sharon and Jeanie's threats: they will kill her if she does not
quiet down. Hentzau whispers a question to Nathan: is he in control? Nathan
reassures him that he is getting what he wants. Jeanie produces a knife, which
she uses to tear Bobbie Anne's clothing. Again Hentzau questions this action,
but Nathan impatiently assures him that these all is going as planned, these
are clothes which he has provided and Bobbie Anne knew that she was going to be
handled roughly. Gerrit is getting a little uneasy, but a voyeuristic impulse
keeps him on the second camera. Then in the struggle Bobbie Anne is hit in the
mouth and blood trickles out. Gerrit puts his camera down and goes to
intervene. Nathan has Richard cut, but Gerrit's camera keeps capturing an image
from its position on the floor. Sharon and Jeanie object to Gerrit's intrusion,
while Bobbie Anne pleads for help. Nathan reiterates that he has cut. When he
and Richard pull him away, Gerrit appeals to Hentzau. Hentzau now defends
Nathan's artistic choice. Gerrit plans to leave and call the cops. Nathan nods
to Richard to start his camera again. It captures Hentzau convincing Gerrit to
just go home, even suggesting that Gerrit's decision might affect his grade in
Hentzau's class. Finally Gerrit just leaves.
Hentzau cautions Nathan to
make certain that his actors don't improvise quite so violently again. The
three women go into the bathroom. Richard releases his camera from the tripod
and follows slips outside, as Eddie returns with some pizzas.
In the cramped bathroom,
Sharon and Jeanie are still lightly in character, teasing the hapless Bobbie,
playfully suggesting that the pizza will be her last meal. Unnoticed, Richard
shoots all this through the bathroom window. When Bobbie puts her head under
the sink spigot to wash off the blood, Sharon presses down on Bobbie's neck;
and Richard stops shooting.
The floor camera captures
the scene in the dining room. Sharon and Jeanie come out and help themselves to
pizza. Hentzau takes the opportunity to pontificate about his own beliefs,
which reject traditional narrative approaches and "fake"
documentaries. Hentzau cites the case of a high school girl murdered at a party
in Los Angeles, where most of the other guests thought it was a joke and urged
the killer on. He gives Nathan credit for probing the terrain between fiction
and fact but questions the rigorousness of his preparation. Nathan bristles at
the suggestion that his methods are sloppy but says nothing more.
In a back room, Richard
has turned the camera back on and begun a bizarre scene with Bobbie,
alternately terrorizing and seducing her. Bobbie sobs but doesn't cry out. When
Richard fondles her briefly, she expresses surprise because she had taken him
to be gay. He demands to know who told her that. She explains that she just
assumed that he and Nathan were a couple.
As Richard comes into the
dining room, Eddie notices that the floor camera is still running. Richard
presumes that with Gerrit gone, they will continue to shoot without an EPK.
Nathan assigns Eddie to take over the second camera. Eddie changes the tape, as
Richard records Sharon and Jeanie dragging Bobbie Anne back into the scene.
Bobbie Anne sees Eddie and her eyes seem to plead for help, as he resumes the
EPK shooting. , Impressed by Bobbie Anne's great performance, Eddie just smiles.
After Sharon "receives" a call on her cel phone, the two women decide
to take their victim out of the house.
The group drives along a winding
road into a nearby wooded area in two cars. Eddie drives the one, and Richard
uses a "night vision" lens to shoot Sharon and Jeanie tormenting
Bobbie Anne in the back seat. Sharon has even pulled out a snub-nosed .38
revolver and brandishes it in Bobbie Anne's face. Hentzau drives his car with
the EPK camera perched on the dashboard. Nathan sits beside him and listens to
the feed from the actors' wireless mikes on headphones. Hentzau asks Nathan if
he really thinks he can get away with this. Nathan doesn't get his meaning.
Hentzau clarifies: with such a non-traditional approach to a simple narrative.
Nathan ends the conversation so he can focus on the hearing his performers in
the other car.
Eddie stops by a grove of
trees perched over the road up on an embankment. The women drag their victim
out the car. So he can watch the action, Nathan passes the EPK camera back to
Eddie. The final scene plays out as Sharon and Jeanie lead Bobbie Anne and the
camera up a short path to a pre-dug shallow grave. As they approach it, Bobbie
Anne struggles to break free; but the two women are too strong for her. They
force her to kneel down in the grave, where a body bag has already been laid
out. Jeanie produces a half liter bottle of juice and removes Bobbie Anne's gag.
A wave of the gun stops her from screaming. Then Sharon orders her to drink.
She hesitates: "Drink or get shot in the head." Sharon cocks the
hammer, and Bobbie lets Jeanie pour the liquid down her mouth. Hentzau whispers
a question to Nathan, why he has added this complication? Nathan doesn't
answer. Bobbie starts to lose consciousness and slumps down into the grave. The
two women put her into the body bag, zip it up, and cover her over with dirt.
Hentzau is too surprised to intervene; then everyone is running is running back
towards the car. As Sharon and Jeanie reach the road, another car passes and
they duck down to avoid being seen. Jeanie wipes her fingerprints off the drink
bottle then tosses it into the bushes. Sharon is at the wheel and Richard has
climbed into the back with the camera. As soon as Jeanie is in the passenger
seat, all three drive off.
Hentzau allows than Nathan
has gotten some very impressive performances; but now he wants to rescue Bobbie
Anne. Nathan pulls out the pistol, which Sharon has somehow passed to him.
Hentzau wants to know what's going on. Nathan replies, "What if I told you
the real story was that Eddie got Bobbie Anne pregnant, then Bobbie Anne
threatened him with a paternity suit if they didn't get married?" From
behind the EPK camera, Eddie protests Nathan's revelations. But Nathan
continues: that would ruin Eddie's chances for law school and annoy his wealthy
parents to no end. So Eddie has paid Nathan and Richard to make this movie and
accidentally kill off the troublesome Bobbie. Hentzau says nothing for a
moment. Clearly he believes it might be true. Nathan raises the gun. Now
Hentzau has to go, too. Hentzau asks Nathan to stop the foolishness. Nathan
orders Hentzau to pick up the bottle and hand it to him. Nathan's tone
convinces Hentzau to comply. Nathan's hands are gloved, so now the only
fingerprints on the bottle are Hentzau's. The professor is starting to wonder
what is really going on. Finally, Nathan laughs, pointing out that the great
Professor Hentzau has just swallowed a corny Hollywood plot whole. Nathan
unscrews the top and drinks the rest of the juice. Did Hentzau really think it
was poison? Or that the gun was loaded? Nathan puts the barrel to his temple
and pulls the trigger, which falls on an empty cylinder. Sheepishly Hentzau
reminds him than Bobbie Anne is still buried. Nathan shakes his head and leads
Hentzau back to the grave. The empty body bag lies over the disturbed earth. As
Hentzau bends over to look, he is startled to discover Richard shooting from
the bushes. Apparently the women have doubled around and dropped him off.
Nathan yells, "Cut
and wrap." Hentzau is a bit confused. The EPK camera is still running as
they head back to the cars. Nathan reveals that the EPK camera has been part of
the movie all along, that Hentzau has been portraying the equivalent of the
James Stewart part in Rope. Somewhat mortified, Hentzau stills notes that he
has not wrestled for control of the gun or discovered a body in a wooden chest.
Nathan tosses him the gun and tells him he can at least fire some shots in the
air (as in the ending of ROPE). Hentzau hesitates. Nathan points to the EPK
camera, still running, and tells him this is actually the last scene. Hentzau
holds the gun up and pulls the trigger. A blank discharges. The sound startles
Hentzau, who thought it was unloaded. Nathan nods for him to continue, and
Hentzau fires three more times.
They reach the road, where
Sharon and Jeanie are parked and laughing at the night's adventure. Eddie hands
the EPK camera to Nathan and climbs into the women's car with Richard. Nathan
again will ride with Hentzau. As he gives the pistol back to Nathan, Hentzau
asks if those were blanks or real bullets. Nathan puts the gun in his pocket
and the EPK camera on the dashboard and confesses that they could not afford
blanks but that obviously he didn't load the gun until they went back to the
grave. Hentzau ruefully congratulates Nathan on tricking a performance out of
him. Then Hentzau realizes that Bobbie Anne is not in either car. Nathan says
she was in the first car, but Hentzau insists he did not see her. Hentzau
tenses as Nathan reaches into his pocket. He pulls out a cel phone but then
remarks that there is no service out here. Hentzau rationalizes that each
driver probably thought Bobbie Anne was in the other car. He slows down and
tells Nathan he will find a place to turn around. Nathan nods and puts his the
cel phone back into his pocket. His hand stays there. As Hentzau starts to make
a u-turn, Nathan leans forward and shuts off the EPK camera with his other
hand.
Text, Copyright © 2002 Pendragon Film Ltd.